I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ello Bea!! I liked how you kept the planning to write part in it. It shows your process/thinking of the slide. I never knew that parrots eat meat and flowers! Maybe next time you could change the colour of the text to make it match a bit more, maybe just change it to a dark pink/magenta colour. Anyway thats only a small thing, other than that its perfect!
Hi Bea, I really enjoyed your slide.It was fun to learn about parrots.You missed out the word "know" on slide 5. I would like to see all of the slide within the layout formatted correctly next time. I loved your passion for these birds. It seemed to grow slide to slide.I to would love to see some images of these beautiful birds.What do you think? Stay awesome and be kind.
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Ello Bea!! I liked how you kept the planning to write part in it. It shows your process/thinking of the slide. I never knew that parrots eat meat and flowers! Maybe next time you could change the colour of the text to make it match a bit more, maybe just change it to a dark pink/magenta colour. Anyway thats only a small thing, other than that its perfect!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Bea.
ReplyDeleteYou have shared some interesting facts. perhaps some images that are relevant to the text could be included next time.
Hi Bea, I really enjoyed your slide.It was fun to learn about parrots.You missed out the word "know" on slide 5. I would like to see all of the slide within the layout formatted correctly next time. I loved your passion for these birds. It seemed to grow slide to slide.I to would love to see some images of these beautiful birds.What do you think? Stay awesome and be kind.
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