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Thursday 6 May 2021

Holiday Recount

 Holiday Recount

By: Bea


On the second Monday of the holidays, I woke up happy (like seriously happy), because we were planning to go to timezone. However, when I heard that our Mum wasn’t coming with us, I felt sad. After I got over it, I went and got changed, but then we had to eat first because it was morning and breakfast is always YUM! Well not always? But when I went to change clothes my brother said: “ Hurry Up “.


Then we all got in the car and said goodbye to our Mum. When my dad was driving, we almost got hit by another car because of some dum-dums who were all DRUNK🍻🥂, but we chose to ignore it. But when we were looking for a car park lots of cars were there too! We got out of the car and went to TimeZone, where a few people were playing at the front like on the claw machines. When we went to the back of the TimeZone, there were lots of people there.


When we finished at TimeZone, we were all hungry so then we ate at my favourite food place. It was MACAS like when my Mum first tried Macas. It was delicious and I tried it and IT WAS YUMMY!!!! When we were all finished I said “ NOOOOO “ worst disaster but it was alright at least I ate.


But then my dad remembered that he was going to buy something that is why we went out (well most of it ) and then when we were all in Tower Junction and my dad bought what he needed so then we tried to find a tablet case. But I never found one so then we just went home and then it went to 6 pm and whenever it passed 6 pm or it’s 6 pm we can Chromebook and then after it went to about 7.21 pm we had to stop and then when we stopped my Mum already cooked dinner for us.



This is my Holiday Recount. So our class had work to do and I wanted to finish first but never did. But if there is something wrong with the text please write it in the comments and I will answer it Bye have a good day.

2 comments:

  1. Hey, Bea! Your recount is very informative. I like the part when you said that there were dum - dums on the road! Maybe next time add some sound effects like BOOM POP and KABOOM.
    Zee Ya!
    Savanah.(YO BESTIE!)

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  2. Hello Bea! I really like your holiday recount. I like how you put a little bit of emojis. It also reminds me on how I went to timezone with Chevelle. What food did you have at maccas? Also I think that you should do a : instead of a . for the time Anyway other than that its amazing!

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