I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey bea, Savanah here! I love your poem! you could consider putting in a fancy font to make it look like royalty! Just maybe in the last paragraph make the 1st and 2nd lines rhyme and the 3rd, 4th and 5th lines rhyme. Blog ya later, Savanah.
Hey bea, Savanah here! I love your poem! you could consider putting in a fancy font to make it look like royalty! Just maybe in the last paragraph make the 1st and 2nd lines rhyme and the 3rd, 4th and 5th lines rhyme. Blog ya later, Savanah.
Hi Bea Chevelle here 💕 I like how you made it all rainbow! The rainbow ness made my socks jump off! It was perfect but maybe next time don't put under lines under all of the word bye!
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Hey bea, Savanah here!
ReplyDeleteI love your poem!
you could consider putting in a fancy font to make it look like royalty!
Just maybe in the last paragraph make the 1st and 2nd lines rhyme and the 3rd, 4th and 5th lines rhyme.
Blog ya later,
Savanah.
Hey bea, Savanah here!
ReplyDeleteI love your poem!
you could consider putting in a fancy font to make it look like royalty!
Just maybe in the last paragraph make the 1st and 2nd lines rhyme and the 3rd, 4th and 5th lines rhyme.
Blog ya later,
Savanah.
Hi Bea Chevelle here 💕 I like how you made it all rainbow! The rainbow ness made my socks jump off! It was perfect but maybe next time don't put under lines under all of the word bye!
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