I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi Bea It Olivia H here
ReplyDeleteI really like your song it is cool.
next time you could add some word so we know what it is.
how did you make it.
Hey Bea, Savanah here!
ReplyDeleteI love the beat of your music! It has a really lively tune to it. Maybe you could add in a solo with a specific instrument.