I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Bea, Your letter to your Dad is lovely and the layout is too. The photo reminded me of when I went on holiday once in Fiji. Maybe next time you could re read your sentences and make sure they make sense, but still a great blog post. Blog You Later 😃
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia ora Bea
ReplyDeleteI like your work it's cool and I would probably say that you have been in your dad for almost 2 years.Bye? ye bye!
Kia Ora Bea,
ReplyDeleteYour letter to your Dad is lovely and the layout is too. The photo reminded me of when I went on holiday once in Fiji. Maybe next time you could re read your sentences and make sure they make sense, but still a great blog post.
Blog You Later 😃