I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Bea, Courtney here. Well done on giving some helpful information on reptiles! The next thing you might want to work on is some grammar and some other things you need for a perfect blog post. That's all I have to say. Blog you later
Kia ora Bea, Kareem here. I like how you made a drawing of a reptile eating. I think you should put more punctuation and add more information. For instance, you should put in what hot countries reptiles live in.
Kia ora Bea. Nice post! maybe you could work on some things you could maybe add some more slides! I would love to know more about Reptiles, I didn´t know Reptiles could climb trees.
Kia ora Bea. It is Miss Waho from Whakamanawa here. I can see what you have been reading about and you have made a good start to show your learning. Next time, could you explain what subject you were doing and what you were learning?
Bonjour Bea! I see you know a lot about reptiles. I'm interested in this. But on fact three, you have started a sentence with 'They' and haven't finished it. Next time could you add a bit more color and personalize it a bit more, and write the rest of the sentence, it would be even better! Have you thought about doing a slide about other animals? From Mikayla.
Kia Ora Bea its Aliyah from Whakamanama Great post!! Maybe next time you could make more didn't sides about what you like. I didn't no Reptilles could climb. Blog you later!!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia ora Bea, Courtney here.
ReplyDeleteWell done on giving some helpful information on reptiles!
The next thing you might want to work on is some grammar and some other things you need for a perfect blog post.
That's all I have to say. Blog you later
Kia ora Bea, Kareem here. I like how you made a drawing of a reptile eating. I think you should put more punctuation and add more information. For instance, you should put in what hot countries reptiles live in.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Bea.
ReplyDeleteNice post! maybe you could work on some things
you could maybe add some more slides! I would
love to know more about Reptiles, I didn´t
know Reptiles could climb trees.
Kia ora Bea. It is Miss Waho from Whakamanawa here.
ReplyDeleteI can see what you have been reading about and you have made a good start to show your learning.
Next time, could you explain what subject you were doing and what you were learning?
Bonjour Bea!
ReplyDeleteI see you know a lot about reptiles. I'm interested in this. But on fact three, you have started a sentence with 'They' and haven't finished it. Next time could you add a bit more color and personalize it a bit more, and write the rest of the sentence, it would be even better! Have you thought about doing a slide about other animals?
From Mikayla.
Kia Ora Bea its Aliyah from Whakamanama
ReplyDeleteGreat post!! Maybe next time you could make more didn't sides about what you like. I didn't no Reptilles could climb.
Blog you later!!