I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Guten Tag, Rliey here this is a every good post you need to remove the part with where you live just for protection you don't want anyone going in to your house right? anyway it would be cool if you show what a daily bases anyway this is really cool. well bye see you later
Hello Bea it is me Raewyn I love how you put your slide like that my most favourite part in the slides is the part where you show your parents like disappeared then when you press it the picture comes that is cool I love it your bff classmate Raewyn
Guten Tag. Kaycee here this is a every good post you need to remove the part with where you live just so anyone going in to your house well Ill blog you later :D
Kia Ora Bea, I really like the title page of your life, is that you? Never mind that, You can probably add the title as "My Family -by Bea" I really enjoyed the blog post, You can ask your teacher for transitions to make it more interesting. (moves the slide each time you click)
hey bea its trisanah's sister Alizae you did really well nice job mayby you sould put like some more people on your slide or some more stuff on your slide that you love but great job.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia Ora Bea please do not tell people were you live. I'm not trying to be mean.. thank you
ReplyDeleteGuten Tag, Rliey here this is a every good post you need to remove the part with where you live just for protection you don't want anyone going in to your house right? anyway it would be cool if you show what a daily bases anyway this is really cool. well bye see you later
ReplyDeleteHello Bea it is me Raewyn I love how you put your slide like that my most favourite part in the slides is the part where you show your parents like disappeared then when you press it the picture comes that is cool I love it your bff classmate Raewyn
ReplyDeleteGuten Tag. Kaycee here this is a every good post you need to remove the part with where you live just so anyone going in to your house well Ill blog you later :D
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Bea, I really like the title page of your life, is that you? Never mind that, You can probably add the title as "My Family -by Bea" I really enjoyed the blog post, You can ask your teacher for transitions to make it more interesting. (moves the slide each time you click)
ReplyDeletehey bea its trisanah's sister Alizae you did really well nice job mayby you sould put like some more people on your slide or some more stuff on your slide that you love but great job.
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